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^^ After some more practice :)

I think this is much better compared to my last one :)
Characters from the story I am working since last year :lol:

you might already see them on my multiliner test piece.

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Mood: Adoration ~JellyBN May 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice work! =)
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~kaisaki1342 May 27, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much.
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Mood: Wow! ~Naa-krzawa7 Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
kakkoi.. XD
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~kaisaki1342 Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks ^^
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*fabianfucci Apr 18, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Nice inking for clones. :D
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~kaisaki1342 Apr 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
clones?
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*fabianfucci Apr 18, 2012  Professional Filmographer
They all look the same!
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~kaisaki1342 Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Uhmm Zo, I take a little offense on that :sad:.
How do you think they ended up look alike. I tried to change their eye style but since I am still struggling with the pen the details did not come out as I like.Their face shape is also different I am still inconsistent at this point, but I am trying to make them not to look like each other.Except probably the school uniform:lol: . So if you can tell me why they still look alike I will appreciate it. :)
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*fabianfucci Apr 19, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Hair style - the same. Eyes all open the same amount, and staring lost into space. Mouth - the same. Nose - the same. Bodies - the same. Face shape - the same.

It usually happens when drawing based on a popular style like manga. The ink looks good, but in a drawing that looks rather dull it loses some of the spirit.

I am sorry to put it like this, but I find no other way to express it. The good thing is that variations on features are not hard to try, and usually leads to richer pictures, and inking looks better in them.
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~kaisaki1342 Apr 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I rather have you explain it that way, than the previous one liner. because those one liners makes me lost. And with explanation I can see where I went wrong :). Like I said I am still very inconsistent. I have their features drawn on my sketchpad differently. The girl in front supposedly have a square face and the one with circle glasses suppose to have oval shape face, they did not come out as I like them :(. The features on this drawing is not the focus when I make them since I just throw a drawing and tried to see the improvement on the inking so the composition and other things have not been thought of well.
I think with more practice I hope to transcribe what is in my mind better in paper.

Appreciated the little harsh crit :lol:
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